Exploring Communities

Project 3

 

Purpose: In this paper, you will begin thinking about the researcher’s role as an observer of a community.  The community might be small and interconnected, such as the Marrowbone miners, or large and diffuse, such as the suffragists.  Whatever its size, the researcher often plays a tedious role in a community, perhaps as participant and observer.  The other goal of this paper is to begin the research process for the final project.

 

Preparation and research:

The readings in this unit will show you a variety of ways that researchers become involved in their surroundings: Lars Eighner’s “Dumpster Diving,” Barbara Ehrenreich’s “Serving in Florida,” Erik Reece’s “Death of a Mountain,” and Barbara Kingsolver’s “Lily’s Chickens.”  In your paper, you may want to reference these readings to help explain your position as a researcher.  Another research component is the completion of one fieldwork exercise, preferably either an interview or photographs.  Finally, you will need to find at least three sources (either academic or popular) to include in your paper as potential sources for the final project.  While you may not use these sources extensively in this paper, you will want to make a case for their usefulness and demonstrate your familiarity with them.

 

The Details:

In this paper, you will narrate your initial foray into the research process.  With this type of writing exercise, it will be most important to portray the exploratory nature of this process.  “I read the essays and then I went to the library” does not demonstrate the struggles you underwent in the thinking process.  Perhaps “I first realized the potential discomfort in research after reading Reece’s admission that his daily activities were dangerous.  Yet, it wasn’t until I began looking through the California Afghan Artists Collection that I discovered an interviewer is a silent witness to the necessity of art during war” would work better. 

 

Therefore, you can take your reader on a journey through the following: your synthesis of any of the readings as an example of the role of the researcher (optional), the experience of conducting fieldwork (required), your initial consideration of two collections (required) and ruminations on potential resources (discussion of three sources required).  In this way, you are completing a distinct project while gearing yourself up for the final, ten-page project on the collection of your choice.  As you finish this journey for this project, you will want to discuss your upcoming plans for the next project.

 

Draft/PR: 7.14

Final copy: 7.18

 

The formatting guidelines for this paper include: following MLA guidelines for citations, five full pages, double-spaced, typed, ‘normal’ margins (1”-1.25”), TNR font, and a header.  The header should include your name, my name, class and section #, and the date.  The upper right corner of the header should include your last name and page #.  Remember to also include your title and a Works Cited page (not one of the three pages of your essay).

 

To reiterate some of my expectations:

A quick note about the fieldwork requirement: You will want to conduct research that focuses on either a community you are a part of or a community where you are an outside observer.  Given the limited timeframe of this assignment, you may want to conduct research in a community where you know the members so that it will be easier to have their permission.  Maybe you would like to interview a member of your family (or a team, social group, etc) about his/her experience within a particular community he/she is (or was) a part of.  Or you could complete a formal observation of a group.  Or you could take pictures of a group as a photographic collection.  Within your paper, you will want to discuss what it was like to be the “researcher” – how does this experience compare with the readings? How does it compare with peering in at the world in the collections?

A quick note about the collections: You need to discuss two collections that you are considering for your final project (where you will only write about one).  What pulls you toward these collections?  What are your initial thoughts about these collections?  How might you gain a fuller picture of these collections as you proceed?

 

In addition to the “grading criteria” located in Writing at UK, the following may help as you work from the draft stage to the final copy stage.

 

Content/Organization

Is your introduction effective—does it grab my attention?

Do you have a clear thesis with a specific focus and argument?

Do your paragraphs address and develop your thesis?

Are your transitions effective between paragraphs and sentences?

Do you come up with effective examples to support your points?

Do you utilize topic sentences?

Do you stay focused?

If applicable, do you address another point of view?

Does your conclusion answer the question, “so what?”

Does your paper as a whole show a thoughtful analysis of the assigned topic?

Style/Mechanics

Is your style appropriate for your audience?

Are your sentences varied in length and structure?

Do you write with active, vigorous verbs?

Are your ideas clearly expressed through refined word choices and syntax?

When occasion merits, do you write descriptively with concrete images?

Do you try to use metaphor and simile to enhance your points?

Mechanics/Conventions

Is your paper spell-checked?

Is your paper free from reoccurring grammatical errors?

Do you cite your sources correctly (both in-text and on a works cited page)?

Does your paper have a title?

Do you place your last name and page number on the upper right margin of each page?

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